Thursday, March 12, 2009

Free Verse: an ode to William Carlos Williams

I have always loved the poem from William Carlos Williams called "This is just to say" were it is a simple verse about eating the plums "which you were probably saving for breakfast. Forgive me, they were so sweet and so cold." I thought I would allude to that verse.


An Allusion to William Carlos Williams


I wanted to write a poem
about eating plums for
breakfast that were not for me,
but my husband
doesn’t like plums,
nor would he eat them for breakfast.
So...
sorry Dear, I drank the last
of the milk.

3 comments:

Heather said...

The William Carlos Williams poem you allude to is one of my favorites of his. Williams is good at capturing a single moment/image with only a few words. I like the reference and the humor that you use in your free verse.

Rebekii said...

Well apparently I am going to have to read some William Carlos Williams because I certainly like this poem inspired from him!

Bonnie said...

Very clever. It made me laugh.